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Thursday, 4 August 2011

Move On is What They say, can't is What I say



Move on is all they say,

Because i am still longing for you which is what holding me back they all say.

But nor did you neither did they understand that you are my breaths, an eternal part of my life.

Is what i say.



I try so hard to control how i feel about you, is what i say.

But then i have lost it all, is what they say.

I am ruining my life in your thoughts, they say.

But nor did you neither did they understand that you were my happiness and my serene peace.

Is what i say.




Do not hold back for a man who din't love you at all, they say.

He isn't worth of you, they say.

But nor did you neither did they understand that i felt blessed having you in my life.

Like a princess found her prince charming i felt.

Is what i say.




Do not shed your tears for him, they say.

Live your life if its a life without him, they say.

But nor did you neither did they understand that you where my life, now its so hollow.

Your absence is like a curse on my fate.

Is what i say.




A lifeless burnt tree is what i have become who used to bear flowers of happiness once.

Now all so barren and scared is what i have become.

Is what i say.




Fall in love again, theysay.


Wipe your tears and smile again, is what they say.

But nor did you neither did they understandthat you were the grin on my face.

Is what I say.




How can i break my chords with you,

The love we shared with rossy kisses and breezy warm embraces that we shared.


How can i forget the promises you had made, the life we were supposed to share.


Together in each others arms. you always said.



How can i forget that you loved me once,

May be now its all so fake, in worlds eye today.

But I got carried away and now its hard to return back.

To square one, with your hollowing absence.

Is what i say.


5 comments:

  1. liked the style of this poetry...very genuinely thought and very unique way of expression...true feelings! :)

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  2. @livz...thank u so much for the beautiful comments u always give...:)

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  3. omg..........
    itz hard but move on baby............;)

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  4. Yeah i agree with livz, the style of poetry was very unique..nice!
    Its hard and you know best about the emotions raging in you but then again moving on is the best option..

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  5. Hello.
    I felt your pain with every word.
    It's tough when the one you love no longer feels the same way.
    Acceptance and healing come with time.

    Best wishes to you.

    Very nicely done!

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