You entered my Life slowly, tip-toeing.
Like o Rosy breeze you filled my world with your fragrance, that still lingers in me.
My body was bathed in flower petals,
The sooth, mildness of your heart wrapped around me.
But you exited my Life like a gush of air, at its full speed.
A storm in its fury, tornadoes swirling in the scent of our love.
Uprooting every bit of me from the soil of my courage, my strength and my dignity.
Strangling me with the words of our separation.
Like whiplashes your fury hit me,
Like unhealable scars your rude words are still felt in me.
I have fallen in the trenches of my misery, no escape from this sorrowful destiny.
I try to vent out my anger through the flow of my bleeding pen.
As I cannot abuse you to my best as i want to.
Because I am still in love with you.
The love whose cupid arrows now hit me to the core of my heart.
But they don't bloom into tiny little red hearts.
Instead the hit of it ooze out the lingering pain in me.
So hard was the fury of your words you last said to me,
Like thousand scratches they got embossed on me.
I am battered, pestered and weeping to the death of our love.
Yet I raise my arms, my numb fingers to reach out for you.
But every time I try to do,
I capture thin cold air that pinches me, my open wounds.
I am now in the wait of that time, when it will come to an end.
Your memories, the scent of yours left in me, which i still breathe it.
I long for that time now, when it will be in ashes.
An angel with a hallow will come to me.
Lift my soul from this wounded body of mine,
Like a cocoon woven in silk thread she will take me.
Up i'll be gone far from all these, like a breeze in the sky I'll vanish.
Yet I'll leave a mark on your heart.
Not of spears, nor of whiplashes neither of misery.
But it will be the mark of my love, I had for you till ETERNITY.

this is beautiful..i have no words..you have left me speechless
ReplyDelete"like thousand scratches they got embossed"....wow! how can u express so beautifully!
ReplyDeleteSiiighhhhhh.... Beautiful penning!
ReplyDeleteamazing i should say......:))
ReplyDeletefelt as if i am watching a movie..
BEAUTIFUL........:)
@magicinthebackyard.....thank you so very much.....and i love the siggghhhhh you have written...:))
ReplyDelete@namita.....thanks....and i don't know how far its like a movie....but i am touched by your comment...:)
Thank you for joining Poets United. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading poetry. We also look forward to seeing you in our community.
ReplyDeleteInk runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand
moving!
ReplyDeleteheartbreaking and touching. thank you for sharing with imperfect!
ReplyDelete@marit. thank u.:)
ReplyDelete@emily thank you so much for allowing to add my link on your blog.:)
I love the repeated types of wind/movement - very evocative.
ReplyDeletepowerful..
ReplyDeletethanks.
cupid arrows more often bring tears of joys as well as sorrows.cant predict! lovely and soulful writing!
ReplyDeleteThis is so sad. I'm drawn into the beauty to then be dashed against the storm's eye and ultimately into morose and then the hopeful mark of eternity.
ReplyDeleteVery effective journey.
I wonder if they really ever 'get' how devastated we are by the end. Well written.
ReplyDelete@melle thank you. :)
ReplyDelete@the cello thanks dear. :)
@deeju yup cupid's arrows are so unpredictable.:/ :)
@debi thank you and yup its was journey for me. :)
@wyominga i to wonder this thing that do they really understand how it feels of being thrown down from the heights of love they take us to. sad they don't but that's how it is. ;/
You have threaded a wonderful silk poem here :)
ReplyDeleteThe pain is so real, intense - it almost hurts to read it! Good show of emotion!
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So powerful and so lovely. Such a strong piece. Thank you so much my entry this week for the first rally is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/01/life-memories/
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful sad poem, lovely!
ReplyDelete"I cannot abuse you to my best as I want to because I am still in love with you" -- Oh that feeling! Yes, you write with such feeling!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful blog! I love your words here and the imagery takes me to exactly where you are.
ReplyDelete@leonargo thank you dear.:) and i love it the way you said a silk poem.:)
ReplyDelete@benjity thank you.:)
@ann thank you.:)
@Ina thanks.:)
@kay i loved your comment. its so much agony at times when you want to hold the collar of the person and question but you can't.:/
@ground thanks:)
wow, that is beautifully written, and the sorrow is so powerefully expressed thru your words.
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